Can She Feel Me?
By Danielle Miller
I can’t believe how she has grown. She is much more than I dreamed. It’s wonderful to see her laughing again after seeing nothing but sadness.
I place my hand on her shoulder and wonder…can she feel the happiness she brings to me?
Her eyes light up with every word about him. The more I hear, the more I know she is in good hands. They are in love and perfect for each other.
I place my hand on her shoulder and wonder…can she feel that I am happy for her?
Years have passed and she is dressed in white. She walks down the aisle with such grace. Nothing is as beautiful as she.
I place my hand on her shoulder and wonder…can she feel my love for her?
I see her standing alone. She kneels down next to where I lay. I kneel beside her as she traces each letter of my name.
I place my hand on her shoulder and wonder…can she feel me?
Can she feel that I have been with her all this time?
I love the line “can she feel” throughout. As someone with a literary blog, I find that repetition is hard to use tastefully, but it really works well in this. Great post.
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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